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Alexander Ipfelkofer's avatar

Like the idea of a Temporal Tribunal. I'd send them to certain people to collect a few years 😅

Jessica Maison's avatar

Nice! Love the concept of having to repay time you stole from someone.

Cole Noble's avatar

Thank you very much for reading!

AstroMommy's avatar

Oooh, creepy! My favorite part was, "His skin felt fibrous and coarse, like cheap sheets at a seedy motel. There was no border between the edge of his sleeve, and the beginning of his flesh. His suit WAS his skin." Loved that image! I could actually feel the sheet and the suit being skin and had a physical reaction! What happens next?!

Cole Noble's avatar

Thank you for reading!! While this is the end for this particular character, I explored a lot more of the human-impersonating lawyers and their secret time-based court system in a follow up story, “Restitution.” It’s part of the stasis collection, and available to read now!

Dee Rambeau's avatar

You’re a creepy little ditty cooker ☺️

I like it.

Cole Noble's avatar

Thank you very much!

The Chronicler's avatar

This are like little nuggets of gold, always look forward to these

Cole Noble's avatar

Thank you so much! I honestly may shift my focus a bit to write more of these after my current publishing calendar clears