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Andrei Atanasov's avatar

Woo, damn! Nice job. I love how philosophical your short stories can get.

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Cole Noble's avatar

Thank you!

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Bridget Riley's avatar

Oh my gosh, this is terrifying. The slow ratcheting up of legality is horrible. It’s so good, though!

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Cole Noble's avatar

Policy always happens camel’s-nose-in-the-tent style. When the US government started levying income tax for example, it was only meant to apply to a minuscule fraction of citizens. Then they lowered the threshold each year.

Point is: whenever a new power is created, there’s always a risk it will be turned on you.

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Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️'s avatar

That gave me the chills. I could imagine some current day government wanting to do this.

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Cole Noble's avatar

People don’t even need a brain chip. Neighbors would gleefully snitch on each other for petty shit for free. In hindsight, that’s the least realistic part of my story lol

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Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️'s avatar

This is, sadly, true.

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Maureen's avatar

Wow!! I can totally imagine this happening someday and it is super scary. Nicely done!

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Cole Noble's avatar

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed. A lot of the new features being required in cars got me thinking…

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