Nightmares haunt a once-unflinching detective, in the wake of a brutal case. With sleeplessness and paranoia taking their toll, his partner suggests that an experimental drug from a shadowy pharmaceutical company may be just what the doctor ordered.
Thank you so much! It took me a few edits to come up with a way to do it that didn’t knock the reader out of the story. Excited to bring this one home!
Thank you so much! I found myself in the same situation as I think you did. I originally wanted this to be a single part. But I got about 4,000 words in, and realized that Sandy getting lured way, way deeper was probably the best natural stopping point before things really popped off.
This makes my second post in a row playing around with a non-linear story, too. In the first draft, Sandy starts at work and then travels to the clinic. But I wanted to take the opportunity to play around with the portrayal of memories in a way that still felt organic... this is such a fun project. Thanks for dreaming this one up. (Get it? :-P)
Shit Sandy-
what fun Cole! Love this. And particularly the formatting and memory dialogue jumps
Thank you so much! It took me a few edits to come up with a way to do it that didn’t knock the reader out of the story. Excited to bring this one home!
This sucked me in immediately. The way you detailed the perspective made it almost felt like a video game. Ah, I love it! I can't wait for more.
Thank you so much! I found myself in the same situation as I think you did. I originally wanted this to be a single part. But I got about 4,000 words in, and realized that Sandy getting lured way, way deeper was probably the best natural stopping point before things really popped off.
This makes my second post in a row playing around with a non-linear story, too. In the first draft, Sandy starts at work and then travels to the clinic. But I wanted to take the opportunity to play around with the portrayal of memories in a way that still felt organic... this is such a fun project. Thanks for dreaming this one up. (Get it? :-P)
Really well done and definitely organic 👌
Ooooh that ending makes me so curious! Can't wait to see what comes next!
Thank you very much! Excited to share it!!